Ignite learner response

The walking dead

Representation of women in the show-good clear opening laying out text and debate.
Good use of images to illustrate point. Idea of unusual rep of women is explored well here-really good use of research and images.
Some points are a little simplistic and shot of male character does not link to question or debate.
Too many slides have allot of text on them  this doesn't really worth for ignite presentations.
Reviews are potentially relevant but not enough time to explore these issues in more depth.
Great to see media theory - mulvey absolutely appropriate..suggesting text doesn't support the theory is good analysis.
Id like to see more on narrative and character roles-some of this is developed but drift away for main question.
Ending lacks clarity in terms of changing roles and focus on males takes away from original question.

WWW:  I thought that my presentation went well. I thought that the information i gave was mainly relevant and good. I gave as much information as i could and researched it and made sure i knew what i was doing,
EBI: I included some things that wasn't relevant as i didn't know what else to say. I did pause a little nit as i didnt know what to say and i had to think of the information.

Significant-3
Structure-3
Simplicity-3
Rehearsal-4
=13


Q+A-Interesting persona; question regarding representation preferences-handles well and in some detail.
Some interesting questions regarding gender , genre etc-worth exploring in more detail in essay.



3) The final aspect is a paragraph discussing how your presentation will lead into your critical investigation. Some of this may refer to your feedback (a greater focus on media debates, for example) or in rare cases you may want to change the focus of your investigation entirely.

My presentation is based about what im going to be talking about in my critical.  My question is going to be based on gender representation on women. I will be explaining why its good that women have a more masculine feature in T.V show the walking dead. As i will be focusing on this i want to make sure that i can talk alot about. I want to make sure that i have a lot to say and i have info to back it up so that means maybe explain why its bad. Having and explaining  both things will be  a good thing as it will be more of a debate. My representation was based on how the gender was represented in normal ways and in the show. Normally women are seen as distressed and the damsel in distress in movies or films. They are also, seen as sex objects and i want this view to change which in the walking dead it kind of does. In my video i will be showing off that women can be bad, in control and not sad and girly. I want to be able to show the other side of women that they might not see. Having this side can help as i want the audience to be in shock that women can be like this. As the walking dead is based on zombie apocalypse its not just based on that. They are also fearing the humans as what's been happening has turned them into really bad people. I want to be able to show that part that there are bad people around. I want my focus to be on a mental thing so the girl is shown as crazy and deranged. I think that my presentation was done well as i said what i will be talking about in my critical.